2017年12月大学英语六级考试已经结束,今年英语六级考试其中有一则作文题目为助人助己(Help others, and you will be helped when you are in need)。文都教育英语老师提供参考范文一篇如下:
【题目】
Directions: Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Help others, and you will be helped when you are in need.”You can cite examples to illustrate your views.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
【参考范文】
There is a proverb going like this, “Help others, and you will be helped when you are in need.” Simple as the saying is, its implication deserves exploring. From my perspective, the real sense of the proverb lies in mutual help.
It goes without saying that we should place a high value on mutual help mainly because nobody can never confront difficulties in life. Put it another way, in this ever-changing world, mutual help to us is what water is to fish. For instance, if there is an area stricken by an earthquake unfortunately, the whole society will always share endeavors to gets victims out of the difficult situation, offering a helping hand to people suffering in the natural disaster.
In sum, we can not imagine a picture: a society without mutual help, with everybody holding indifferent attitude toward each other, which must be as horrible as the hell. On the contrary, we help others in need, and when we are in need, others help us as well——creating a heaven with all helping hands, providing a ideal paradise for all humanity.
【参考译文】
谚语有云,“助人助己”。虽然这个谚语很简单,但是其内涵值得探索。在我看来,这个谚语的真正含义在于互相帮助。
毫无疑问的是我们应该重视互相帮助,主要是因为从来都没有人可以在生活中免于困境。换言之,在这个不断变化的时代,互助对于我们来讲就像水对于鱼一样重要。例如,如果有的地方不行遭受了地震,全社会总是会携手帮助灾民走出困境,向其伸出援手。
总之,我们无法想象这样一个画面:一个没有互助的社会,人人都漠视彼此,那一定像地狱般恐怖。相反,别人有难,我们伸出援手;我们有难,别人也不会坐视不管,这样才能形成一个人人互助的乐园,为全人类搭建一个理想的伊甸园。
【试题点评】
本次英语六级作文考试中出现的题目都极为相似,例如这则题目是让考生写一篇关于助人助己作文,而还有一篇是要求考生写一则“尊敬别人就是尊敬自己”的作文。题目类型均属于从一则谚语入手的命题提纲式作文。题目明确要求要用例子证明自己的观点,所以在论述的过程中不可以只讲道理,不摆例子,这一点需要考生注意,只有完成试题指令,按题目要求写作才能得到理想的分数,否则写得再漂亮,恐怕也是南辕北辙。
关于这篇作文,大家可以采取经典的写作三段论结构,即首段开门见山用谚语引出主题:互助的重要性;主体段阐述互助的意义和价值,注意还需要运用例证的写作手法;结尾段总结并呼吁彼此要互助互爱。总体而言,本次六级考试作文部分难度属于中等水平,相信在文都考研英语课堂和四六级课堂学习过得的小伙伴会取得不错的成绩!
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